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Swallow; semi final.
May. 25th, 2005 12:06 pm“You were seduced by the open air long before I could get to you.”
Bitter words, once spoken to me by an ex-girlfriend displeased with my dreamer’s nature and better interest in the outdoors than her want for impractical shoes and short, expensive skirts.
”Swallowed by mother Nature’s jaundiced eye.”
( The jaundiced eye. )
[added a few things, rewrote a little, made sure the italics were in here where they should be.]
Bitter words, once spoken to me by an ex-girlfriend displeased with my dreamer’s nature and better interest in the outdoors than her want for impractical shoes and short, expensive skirts.
”Swallowed by mother Nature’s jaundiced eye.”
( The jaundiced eye. )
[added a few things, rewrote a little, made sure the italics were in here where they should be.]