I welcome your opinion any time :) this is last year's, a vision clairvoyant Jadany has that I didn't follow up on at the time. So, it's not fresh. (no writing yet!) I hope to write a shitton this coming month and them do some serious cleanup after of both pieces; after a year of not touching it, I look back on this and feel strongly like it could really go somewhere, the whole thing. I really didn't expect that. Anyway, I'm glad you like it ... And yea, though I won't be making any changes to this immediately, critique could help me see what direction I'm going. So if you have thoughts, do share them :)
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Date: 2008-10-30 11:56 pm (UTC)